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Goof Troop: Fan Fiction Series
Episode 1: Zimmer Down


Goof Troop Theme Song plays, and then as the episode begins, the title shows up on screen. The camera shows the title, Zimmer Down, on the screen. The background of the episode shows Goofy's house with Max relaxing in a chair.

Max:
Max lies back in the chair, and sips lemonade.
Sure is nice outside today. Hey dad, don't you think so?

Goofy:
Goofy walks outside carrying a full pitcher of lemonade.
A-hyuk! Sure is, Maxie. Do you need some more lemonade?

Max:
Max slaps his forehead.
Dad, why do you keep calling me Maxie? You know I hate that.

Goofy:
Goofy chuckles at Max.
You're my son, Max.

Max:
Max whispers to himself as he rolls his eyes.
Yeah, the one thing I wish I could change.

PJ:
PJ jumps the fence and walks over to Max.
Hi Max. Yo, Mr. G. What's up?

Goofy:
Goofy walks over to PJ.
Nothing PJ. Me and Max are just relaxing outside in the warm sun.

Max:
Max jumps out of his chair.
Actually, dad. Me and PJ are going to go to his house to play video games.

Goofy:
Goofy frowns.
But, Max...

Max:
Max jumps up, grabs his jacket, and hops the fence.
Thanks a lot, dad. Be back later tonight. Bye, dad.

PJ:
PJ and Max walk up to the front door of PJ's house.
Why is it you don't like spending time with your dad.

Max:
You try living with him for even one day, and you'll know why I'm always so anxious to escape my dad.

PJ:
O...kay.
PJ opens the door.

Pistol:
Pistol is chasing Chainsaw around the living room.
Come on, doggie. Gimme back my doll.

Chainsaw runs past PJ.

Max:
Dude, what's with your sister?

PJ:
Oh, you mean her screaming. She's been like that since mom bought her a new doll for her dollhouse.

Outside a loud horn blows.

Max:
Hey, Peej. Let's go check this out.

Richard:
Richard is walking to a house. He is directing the moving van into the garage.
Back it up. A little more. More. More. There.

Max and PJ walk across the street to the house.

Max:
Hello. You must be new around here. My name is Maximillian Goofey, and this is my friend PJ...

PJ:
PJ nudges Max.
PJ. Just PJ.

Richard:
Nice to meet you kids. My name is Richard Zimmeruski. We just moved here because I got a new job.

Max:
That sounds cool.

Bobby:
Bobby opens the passenger side of the car and steps out.
Dad, would you like me to start unloading stuff?

Richard:
No, that's okay for now. Why don't you come over and meet these kids? By the way, Max and PJ, this is my son Robert. But his friends call him Bobby.

Max:
Hi, Bobby.

Bobby:
Bobby looks to Max, and then looks up at his dad.
Dad, he looks weird.

Richard:
Robert Zimmeruski, you be nice. Now go play for a while so I can start moving our stuff in.

Bobby:
But, dad.

Richard:
Richard is no longer paying attention to Bobby, and has set his attention towards the movers.
Let's see. That can go in the kitchen. And that....

PJ:
Come on, Bobby. I'll show you around.

Bobby:
Bobby looks at Max, shudders, then walks next to PJ.
All right, let's go.

Max:
So, Bobby. Where exactly did you move here?

Bobby:
Um....

Max:
Bobby, is something wrong?

Bobby:
N...No.
Bobby shrugs his shoulders.
I moved here from a dairy farm about two hours from here.

PJ:
A dairy farm?

Bobby:
Yeah. Um, you wouldn't happen to know where I could find some cheese whiz around here, would you?

Max:
Cheese whiz. Uh. I think there might be some at the store down the street.

Bobby, PJ, and Max walk toward Max's house.

Max:
Hey, dad. I need to get some money out of my room, okay?

Goofy:
Goofy is humming, and, at first, doesn't notice Max. Then, he looks up.
Oh, sure Max. Go ahead. Hey, wait a minute. Who's your new friend?

Max:
Oh. This is Bobby. He and his dad just moved here.

PJ:
Yeah, and get this, Bobby used to live by a dairy farm.

Goofy:
A-hyuk! That's cool.

Bobby:
Bobby turns to Max and PJ. He has a funny look on his face.
A-hyuk? Max, you're dad has a funny laugh.

PJ:
Don't worry. You'll get used to it.

Max:
Max walks inside, and about a minute later, he comes outside with a $5 bill.
See you in a while, dad.

PJ:
Let me get my bike and I'll be ready to go.

Max:
Why don't you go see if you can get yours too, Bobby?

Bobby:
Bobby looks at Max again, then walks over to his house and pulls out his blue bike, and copper-colored helmet.
Okay, guys. I'm ready to go.

Max:
That's a cool helmet, Bobby. Where'd you get it?

Bobby:
Bobby straps his helmet on. His ears slightly stick out of his helmet.
Up near the dairy farm. I bought it with the allowance I had.

PJ:
PJ walks back over to Max and Bobby, and he is walking his bike with him.
Well, let's go, guys.

All three of them get on their bikes and begin pedaling.

Bobby:
So, how far is the store?

Max:
Oh, it's not too far. It's just a couple blocks down the street.

Bobby:
Cool. Um, hey Max. I'm sorry for being so rude earlier.

Max:
Ah, forget about it. PJ gave me the same treatment when we first met.

PJ:
Of course, that was mostly because my dad and Max's dad used to go to school together, and it drove my dad insane.

Max:
So, Bobby. Do you have any favorite foods?

Bobby:
My favorite food is Double Cheese Pizza, but my favorite snack is cheese whiz.

Max:
So, that explains why you asked.

Bobby:
Yeah, for some reason, living at a dairy farm has given me a cheesy appetite. My dad taught me how to make it, but since we moved, I haven't had it in a couple days.

The store comes into view.

Bobby: Hey, uh.
Bobby sees the store.
Is that the store right there?

Max:
Oh, yeah. That's it.

Max, PJ, and Bobby start pedaling to the store.

Bobby:
That's a big store.

PJ:
Yeah, we know.

Bobby, PJ, and Max put their bikes in the bike racks, and lock them up, and then they go inside. A bell rings as Max pushes the door open.

Scene Change: Goofy's House. Pete is storming over to Goofy with an upset look on his face.

Pete:
Where in the world is my kid?

Goofy:
Goofy looks up, and stops raking.
Gawrsh, Pete. Didn't PJ tell you that he went to the store with the new neighbor's kid?

Pete:
Pete's eyes light up with anger.
What?! That boy better have a good excuse. He had chores that he should have been doing.

Goofy:
Goofy puts his hand on Pete's shoulder.
Pete, it's okay. They'll be back.

Peg:
Peg shouts from her house.
Peter! I told you to clean up this kitchen.

Pete:
Pete shouts back.
Coming, honey biscuit.

Scene Change: Outside the store. Bobby, PJ, and Max are walking out of the store. Bobby is holding a plastic bag.

Bobby:
Thanks for bringing me up here.

Max:
Hey, no problem.

Bobby:
Bobby pulls the cheese whiz. Then, he pulls the cap off of it, and squirts it directly into his mouth. He starts smacking his lips together as he eats it.
This is good. Yum.

Max:
Max looks at Bobby.
Ew...

PJ:
PJ looks at Bobby. His face turns green in disgust.
Dude, I've never seen anything so gross.

Bobby:
Bobby swallows the cheese whiz.
Scrumptious.

PJ:
Well, let's go. I should have been at home already. My dad will be mad enough that I wasn't at home.

Bobby:
What? You're dad gets upset when you go outside.

PJ:
That's not exactly it.

Bobby re-places the cap on the cheese whiz, and gets on his bike with PJ and Max.

Scene Change: Richard Zimmeruski's Kitchen. He is unpacking some glasses into the cupboards. Goofy is over there helping him.

Richard:
Your son Max seems real nice, Mr. Goofey.

Goofy:
He's a nice kid.
Goofy picks up a cup.
Where would you like this?

Richard:
Put that in the cupboard next to you.

Goofy nods his head as he places the cup in the cupboard.

Max, who is arriving from outside, realizes that his dad's car is across the street, and then walks his bike over there.

PJ:
Well, I had better get home. See you later, Max. Bye, Bobby.
PJ rides back over to his house, and Bobby goes inside his house.

Bobby:
Come on in, Max.

Max:
Uh, sure. Okay.
Max follows Bobby into the house.

Bobby:
Bobby shouts as he walks inside.
Dad, I'm back.

Richard:
Richard hollers from the kitchen.
In here, son.

Max:
Mr. Zimmeruski, Is my dad over here?

Goofy:
A-hyuk! I sure am, Max.

Bobby walks up to his dad, then takes the cap off the cheese whiz, and squirts it into his mouth.

Richard:
Where did you get that cheese whiz?

Max:
I bought it for him.

Richard:
That was nice of you, Max.

Max:
Max looks to Richard.
It was no big deal.

Bobby:
Bobby looks at Max.
I still think that it was nice of you to take me.

Max:
Mr. Zimmeruski. Would you like me to help you put some stuff away?

Richard:
Sure, Max. I would greatly appreciate that.

Max:
Max walks over to a box that reads 'Bobby's Stuff.' The camera focuses in on the box and what's written on it.
Which one is Bobby's room?

Bobby:
Oh, I'll show you.
Bobby walks down a hallway, and Max follows.

Both of them turn into a room located on the left side of the hallway.

Max:
This is your room, huh? It looks pretty cool.

Bobby:
Bobby sprays some more of the cheese whiz into his mouth.
Thanks a lot, Max. Of course, it's not quite done yet.
Bobby sits down on his bed.

Goofy and Richard bring a big box into Bobby's room. Then, they walk it to the bed, and slowly set it on the floor.

Richard:
There are your blankets for your bed, Bobby.

Bobby:
Bobby looks at his dad.
Thanks, pop.

Max:
Let's go and finish helping out.

Bobby:
Okay, let's go.

Goofy:
What else do we need to move in here?

Richard:
Bobby's dresser needs to come in.

Max:
Max quickly turns to Richard.
We'll go get it.

Richard:
Oh, okay. The moving van should be right in the garage. Bobby's dresser should be near the front.

Max and Bobby run outside, then go into the garage.

Bobby:
Let's see.
Bobby looks at the back of the moving van, and then opens it up. There is a cedar wood dresser right in front.

Max:
Is this it?
Max walks up to the cedar dresser.

Bobby:
Yeah, that's it.
Bobby pulls the moving van ramp out, and walks up to the dresser.
You get one side, and I'll get the other.

Max:
Max walks over to the right side of the dresser and lifts it. About a second later, he drops it.
Man, that is really heavy.

Bobby:
Let's try again, okay.

Both of them lift the dresser, and walk it down the moving van ramp.

Max:
Max struggles with the dresser.
What do you have in here? Bricks?

Bobby:
Bobby laughs.
You'd think so, wouldn't you?

As Goofy walks outside, he bumps into Bobby. Bobby drops the dresser, and because of the pressure left in his hands, Max drops it, too, just barely missing his foot.

Goofy:
Oh. I'm sorry about that you two.

Bobby:
It's no big deal. We didn't get hurt, and that's what we should worry about.

Max:
Yeah, dad. We're okay.

Bobby and Max pick up the dresser again and walk it to Bobby's room.

Bobby:
Bobby and Max walk to one of the corners of the room.
Go ahead and set it down right here.

Both of them put the dresser on the floor. Goofy follows them with a box that has some more of Bobby's stuff.

Goofy:
Well, Max. Come on. We have to get going.

Max:
Uh. Hey, dad. Can Bobby eat over at our house tonight?

Goofy:
Well, I don't know.

Richard:
Oh, go ahead. It will be easier for me to finish unpacking if I have more space.

Bobby:
Dad, you're the coolest.
Bobby runs to his dad and high fives him.

Goofy:
We'll have him back home in a couple hours.

Richard:
Okay. Bobby, you be good.

Max:
Thanks again, Mr. Z.

Max, Bobby, and Goofy walk back to the car, and as the three get in, Goofy drives into his driveway.

Scene Change: Inside Goofy's House. The doorbell rings and Goofy answers it.

Delivery Man:
Hello. I've got one Double Cheese Pizza, and one Sausage and Pepperoni.

Goofy:
A-hyuk! Great. How much do I owe you?

Delivery Man:
Let's see. You owe me $17.50 today.

Goofy:
Here you go.
Goofy hands the money to the deliveryman.

Delivery Man:
Here's your pizza.
The deliveryman hands the pizzas to Goofy. Then, he walks off, and Goofy closes the door.

Goofy:
Here's the pizza, boys.

Bobby:
All right. Double Cheese. Max, I'm going to love having you for a friend.

Max:
I think we're going to get along just fine, Bobby.

The episode credits roll down the screen, and the show ends.
This is a fanfic based on Goof Troop that was written in script form. I did this more than 3 years ago, when I wanted to be a script writer. Goof Troop was always one of my favorite cartoons, and I started getting ideass for my own idiotic Goof Troop episodes. I thought (when I was younger, about sending them in to Disney, but decided against it.

Goof Troop, Goofy Movie, and Extremely Goofy Movie are all copyright Disney and their owners/creators.

This one is called Zimmer Down, which actually accompanies an 80-page script I did of my own sequel to 'An Extrememly Goofy Movie. In this, Max and PJ meet up with the child version of their buddy Bobby for the first time.

Richard Zimmeruski (dubbed Bobby's dad in my fanfic) is copyright me.
© 2006 - 2024 sonic626
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TheYoungHistorian's avatar
I love backstories on certain characters, and this one leads up to "AGM" from 1992 - 1995. ;) (Wink)